I am like that leaf
Who falls from a tree,
lying on the ground
after living its share of glorious round.
People may find me useless now…
BUT, FOR ME…… I AM FREE.
For now, finally I don’t serve anymore.
I don’t have to share my identity
For now, finally…. I am me.
And, when I am me
I am free…
I am like that body dead,
Around whom people gathers with eyes sad…
For them, I am gone….
For me, I’m left with a new song.
Courage was long lost….
Life was just a carriage…
Where ego, pride, joy,gloom were the only luggage.
I’m at peace now,
To have left those unnecessary and meaningless baggages..
Now, people may judge me dead..
But, for me , I AM FREE.
For now, finally I AM ME….
No strings attached..
Nothing more I need to catch
I am fully in me
Oh, I was never so relaxed
Now, I understand that,
When I am me,
I am absolutely FREE..πππππ
SO, EVERONE THERE, ESPECIALLY ALL THOSE BEAUTIFUL N STRONG LADIES, LET’S FOR ONCE…THINK ABOUT ONESELF.
LET’S JUST IGNORE ONCE,THE FEELING OF BEING SELFISH AND IN THIS ONE SOLE LIFETIME, LET’S BE FREE.
COME ON, LET’S BE ME…
Ahaaa…!!!! Dis is just just just beautiful piece yaar . It’s fabulous
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Thanks nirant…. Thaanks for liking..means a lot
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Pleasure always mate for beautiful stuff
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πΈπΈ
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No strings attached..
Nothing more I need to catch
I am fully in me
Oh, I was never so relaxed
Beautiful lineππ
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Thanks…a lot
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Just loved itβ€
I am like that body dead around whom……. How deep n effective words.π
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Thanks…means a lot
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Pleasure always to read your wordsπ
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πΈ
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Loved thisβ€β€
Keep writing π
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Thanks……
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My pleasure β€
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True that.. awesome.. ππΌππ
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Such a joyful poem to read. Loved it. And some may be signing I want to break free.
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Haaa haaaa
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ππΈkinto moi hosake tumar kobita tu birat bhal palu
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Wow… Moi bhabie asilu ketia likhu okhomiyaat comment… Start aapuni korile taani loi jaam moi…thank u..dhonyobaad
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Haha. Aapuni nohio tumi koi matiba
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Tumi besi bhal.. Mur likha bur poem ne ki najanu, bhaal ne bea nubuju.. Ji mon jae, hei phalei likhu.. Confession hoe n its good. Okhomia kunu buji napae
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Haha. Tumar last line to hotya katha – kunua nubujeebo. Tumi bor dhuniya kobita leekha. Jana na keyo? Tumi monor para leekha. Monor kabita haday xondor
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Now this is embarrassing.. Moi tumar nisina writerr pora critisism happily accept korim, rather than praise.. I am not even a student in that school where u r the principal.. Moi likhu, bus likhu…shape aru time dia mur dhorjyo e nai. Mur baad diok.. Tumar braint keneke ahe sob..edin I wish, moi u tumar brain n sight dhooki pam. Excellent u r
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Tumi nijoke underestimate korisa. Moi sab impromptu leekhon. Aye matro mein ayta kobita post koriso. Tumar Prathom commentor pora inspire hoi. Tumi jey koisila- never meant to stay π. Btw Thank you for your kind words. πΈπΈ I love your work too
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Wow amazing Wita π€
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Thanks Adithya…
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Good one madam π
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Thank you Sherin
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The state of ME β€
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Oh my I felt so many emotions while reading this . Absolutely beautiful!
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